urban ballet

[pauln]

Hi all, I recently asked a friend to pose for me and this was my favourite from the day. CC welcome

[ChrisLumix]

Well, I think there is so much good about this : the colours, the exposure, the framing, the processing, the model.

 

I do have two things to say since you asked ... the wooden plank top centre is intrusive (could be cloned out? serves no purpose I can see), but also the pose - though she is on her ballet points - is a bit formal perhaps?

[pauln]

Hi Chris, thanks for the input, the object you mentioned was a light from the underpass but maybe it should have either been brighter or just cloned out? Also I see what your saying about the formality, I was trying for an edgy shot but maybe less eye contact was needed?

[ChrisLumix]

Hi Chris, thanks for the input, the object you mentioned was a light from the underpass but maybe it should have either been brighter or just cloned out? Also I see what your saying about the formality, I was trying for an edgy shot but maybe less eye contact was needed?

 

Yes - good point. Maybe she should have been looking up to the curtain top as she pulled it aside? Just thinking aloud here..